new logo

[s1imch4nc3]

After many different changes and hours of moving the letters up and down I think I've got a winner for the new logo for my electronic repair service...
Suggestions and criticism about change are welcome.
See attachment.

[RWenger]

It looks good; I like the idea. The only thing that I notice is that the "pic" doesn't seem to match the E and F. It seems like you have 4 different styles of lettering going on at the same time. Personally, I would go with the two words Epic and Fail having 2 separate stylings, one for each whole word (keep that red styling for fail/ail for sure - I really like that), but that's my opinion.

[s1imch4nc3]

That's what my girlfriend said I'll go back to the drawing board with the "pic" part thanx for the suggestion and I'm glad u like it for the most part.
Did u notice the E/F was actually a picture of a broken iPhone that I cropped?

[RWenger]

Yes, I saw that. I liked that.

[s1imch4nc3]

The amazing things u can do with the stock windows paint lol

[s1imch4nc3]

Here is a revised version I changed the pic part to a different font and sized the image to about the size i want it to be for the rest of the ad. Im having trouble getting the rest of the ad that lists my main services to look right (paint does its wonders but has its limits). See attachment:

[RWenger]

(05-31-2012 11:12 PM)RWenger Wrote:  It looks good; I like the idea. The only thing that I notice is that the "pic" doesn't seem to match the E and F. It seems like you have 4 different styles of lettering going on at the same time. Personally, I would go with the two words Epic and Fail having 2 separate stylings, one for each whole word (keep that red styling for fail/ail for sure - I really like that), but that's my opinion.

Here's a quick look at what I meant by that post:

   

[s1imch4nc3]

Now that looks professional I'm guessing Gimp is what u used? I like that alot I was really Hopi g to incorporate the broken iPhone...is there any way u could center wat u made a little more and if I send u a pic of the iPhone I was using could u incorporate it somhow? I'll be sure to give u full credit

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Here is a copy of that iPhone pic hope u can do something with it if u have the time...

[RWenger]

(06-04-2012 07:50 PM)s1imch4nc3 Wrote:  Now that looks professional I'm guessing Gimp is what u used? I like that alot I was really Hopi g to incorporate the broken iPhone...is there any way u could center wat u made a little more and if I send u a pic of the iPhone I was using could u incorporate it somhow? I'll be sure to give u full credit

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Here is a copy of that iPhone pic hope u can do something with it if u have the time...

Thanks. Yeah, I use Gimp.

Make sure you have the rights to use that picture.

   

[s1imch4nc3]

Pure genius once I get the rest of the ad put together I'll get back to you about sticking the technofyed logo on it and a Designed by: Rwenger
somewhere. Thanx again for the help!

[RWenger]

No problem. Don't worry about attribution.

[s1imch4nc3]

OK here's the final feel free to do anymore revising and again thanx for the help.

[townsbg]

Looks good however I recommend that you at least give "estimates."

[RWenger]

Looks pretty good. Do you do any soldering?

[s1imch4nc3]

I ran out of room for estimates but I think I should also.
Im learning to solder but I don't have the equipment so for now I have my sister do any soldering I need and give her a chunk of watever profit I make from the job

[RWenger]

Well, then again the customer won't really care what you do as long as you fix their stuff. I was just curious if you were into that.

[Dusteh]

Your first attachment, I like how E and P are combined,
but what's weird are the letters after E, "pic" which
seems to be dull.